Bedroom Poem

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jethro's picture

She

JudeBreathing

Silken hair

On the pillow

Cheek cupped in my hand

Steady heartbeat

Light caress

Closeness

Sleep

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G Atkinson's picture

Well done. I love the pattern

Well done. I love the pattern of the syllables.

jethro's picture

Thanks Gordon - you picked

Thanks Gordon - you picked it.

Bradley J. Moore's picture

You are braver than me, to

You are braver than me, to post a poem in between all this business stuff. I reserve a special blog for those more intimate types of words! Good stuff, though. Keep doing it. Maybe you'll make me brave, too.

jethro's picture

Thanks Bradley - be brave! i

Thanks Bradley - be brave!
i dont see any disconnect between myself the husband who writes poems, the father who plays lego with his kids and the business man who writes sofware etc - it all fits together and the whole is me.
Cheers